Poster & Magazine Feedback

Poster
Yesterday before our deadline we decided to show the class our poster so we could make any changes before handing it in. Everyones comments seemed to have been positive which was good as these were our targetted audience meaning we had done a good job.
Here is a list of what people had said:

1. Its simple but very effective.
2. If i walked past it in a cinema I would stop to look.
3. The bottom image with the girl and her leg in the air indicates romance.
4. The colours, fonts and title worked well together.

We wasn't suggested any improvements to our work showing that we had done everything right for our targetted audience.

Magazine
 Next we showed the class our magazine, which was also very successful in our audience's eyes. This followed on well from our poster as we used the same colours and style of image.
However this time we had room for improvements.
The comments we got were:

1. Some pink writting didn't stand out so made things unclear.
2. The word 'Faith' in the title wasn't clear and may need changing to a lighter pink.
3. Maybe change some of the font sizes to make some stand out more than others.

After getting these comments we knew exactly what we had to do to improve it. The improvements was only little changes but by doing it means it was correct for our audience.