Above you can see a list of feedback which people have given us. All of the feedback is from our trailer which we uploaded to facebook. The comment from Shahina is from our youtube video. From reading these comments it helps me and my group with how to improve our video for our targetted audience. Our main comment was the about the man who did our voice over. People have said it sounds too deep and not suitable for a Rom-com trailer. However me and my groups idea of having him being so deep in our voice over was to make it comical and an exaggeration of what a typical Rom-com voice over would be. But from reading our feedback this seems to be a concern for our audience as they didn't understand what we wanted to do. This will have to be something that me and my group need to re-think.
A good comment that we got from our audience was that they found it comical. This is good feedback as we wanted it to be funny seeing as its a Rom-com. When thinking of what we was going to put in our trailer to make it funny we were usure on what would make the audience laugh. We struggled with this a little so getting good feedback on how comical it is shows we were successful.
Overall i am pleased with the comments we have recieved as i know this will help us improve our film trailer.
Your feedback needs to be heeded as these people are your target audience. I think you could argue that you were taking the postmodernist approach to typical rom com voiceovers and making it deliberately dramatic. Remember this is a teaser trailer rather than a conventional trailer and the tease is what you are looking for. Acknowledge this in your evaluation.
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